Comments on: Son of Dust

By: Robert Gervais

Robert Gervais — Mon, 11 Jan 2010 01:33:53 +0000

Thank you cosmobencomo! I’m glad that you appreciated the metaphor.

By: cosmobencomo

cosmobencomo — Fri, 08 Jan 2010 08:31:42 +0000

Nice use of chess metaphor.

By: Robert Gervais

Robert Gervais — Fri, 27 Nov 2009 22:50:19 +0000

Thank you Rick! I appreciate your feedback and… It’s always good to know that a fellow writer enjoyed one of my stories. I take your comment as a high compliment. Cheers!

By: Rick Huffman

Rick Huffman — Thu, 26 Nov 2009 21:22:23 +0000

I really enjoyed your story. Great intro. Pulled me right in, kept my attention and very well written. Gerat story! Thank you.

Rick Huffman

By: Robert Gervais

Robert Gervais — Fri, 16 Oct 2009 03:45:06 +0000

I’m glad that you enjoyed the piece! It’s always nice for an author to receive feedback from readers and the internet makes this type of dialogue very rewarding for me.

By: Swede

Swede — Thu, 15 Oct 2009 23:58:55 +0000

Enjoyed the story – vivid images of a place I definitely don’t want to be. I especially liked the first part concerning the location of the prison. The contrast between the landscape and the “cold concrete box” is excellent. Keep up the good work.

By: Robert Gervais

Robert Gervais — Wed, 14 Oct 2009 05:38:17 +0000

Glad you checked out the story! Look for more to come.

By: rjgervais

rjgervais — Tue, 13 Oct 2009 17:18:23 +0000

Both of us enjoyed the story. Nicely done setting it in the ohio region. Glad to see V gets to continue his bookie work and with such powerful friends on the outside. Good work Rob and we want to see more.