http://www.troubadour21.com/series/enjoi/throw-back-part-i/?utm_source=rss&utm_medium=rss&utm_campaign=throw-back-part-i Writers and Artists in the 21st Century Thu, 29 Dec 2011 13:19:30 -0700 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.4 hourly 1 http://www.troubadour21.com/series/enjoi/throw-back-part-i/comment-page-1/#comment-452 Pela Via Thu, 03 Dec 2009 21:50:36 +0000 http://www.troubadour21.com/?p=2746#comment-452 I LOVE this story. I'm still kind of blown away. I can't imagine where you're going to take this. In fact, I don't even want a cliffhanger - I'll be back for number 2 because this is insane. You've got amazing imagery that has stuck in my head. The fast drive, all the buzzing, taking out a nanny, and ending with a big kiss in a crowded street -- wow!! Your writing style lends perfectly to this daunting, hypnotic sense of doom. I can't look away. Like a car crash. Or a sexy apocalypse. I can't wait for more. I LOVE this story. I’m still kind of blown away. I can’t imagine where you’re going to take this. In fact, I don’t even want a cliffhanger – I’ll be back for number 2 because this is insane. You’ve got amazing imagery that has stuck in my head. The fast drive, all the buzzing, taking out a nanny, and ending with a big kiss in a crowded street — wow!! Your writing style lends perfectly to this daunting, hypnotic sense of doom. I can’t look away. Like a car crash. Or a sexy apocalypse. I can’t wait for more.

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